Ghostlies

13th Dec 2013, 4:45 PM
Ghostlies
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Metsfan
Metsfan
13th Dec 2013, 4:45 PM
So sleepy.
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Nama
Nama
13th Dec 2013, 5:14 PM
You just made me cry.
DEBO
DEBO
13th Dec 2013, 5:25 PM
...Dude
Spudfella
13th Dec 2013, 7:41 PM
It's spelled "cemetery."
Mooch
19th Dec 2013, 8:44 AM
Kevin...the comic work here is fantastic. The action and the gestures really tell the story...and the final scene should make just about everyone cry. Your very last lines of dialogue are what throw's this under the bus. Who visit's the grave everyday? The man or the older ghost? That's confusing. And the final statement is just strange. My first recommendation is to eliminate the dialogue completely. Let the pictures tell the action. The man understands why the ghost wanted the flowers. It's the same reason he brings the flowers. He's reconciled the situation, had his cry...the final scene is the flowers are on the young ghost's grave...no dialogue necessary, no explanation necessary. Let the reader figure it out...the picture tells the story...the young ghost loves the flowers... So I would just remove all the text from the final frame.
coriskel
9th Jan 2014, 7:35 PM
Awwwwww so adorable I'm going to make a anime of it :3
Vistor
16th Jan 2014, 3:33 AM
Hey you, you're work is good. Keep at it
just a kid
14th Mar 2014, 6:50 PM
that was sooooo beautiful.
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