Medieval Times

7th Jun 2011, 7:26 AM
Medieval Times
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Metsfan
Metsfan
7th Jun 2011, 7:26 AM
This comic now holds the record for the longest time I've ever spent on a comic. I hope you all like it. I tried to mix it up and actually get creative with it and I like how it turned out.

Time to sleep. I need sleep...
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Comments

MatthewJA
MatthewJA
7th Jun 2011, 7:36 AM
Niiiiiice.
Jim
7th Jun 2011, 8:33 AM
Nice work. You have a lot going on in each frame. Although your various gags are funny by themselves they can be distracting in a long comic strip. They should be subdued. For instance, "Wee Lads" on the bathroom door, looks like something we should pay attention too...but it distracts from where the Knight is really looking. In fact that frame is not even necessary...you could have two balloons when the knight enters the bath. Also, is the Dragon a girl or a guy dragon? Seems to be some sexual identity crisis running through this you might not have intended. But your art work and detail are exceptional and I really like the dragon Love...there is a conflict going on there that is important.
Magravan
Magravan
7th Jun 2011, 8:56 AM
If I wasn't already subscribed, I would have subscribed for this one. Well done, I really enjoyed it :D
MasterofWeirdness
MasterofWeirdness
7th Jun 2011, 11:24 AM
No wonder you haven't made a comic in so long.
Guest
7th Jun 2011, 2:16 PM
@Matt: <3

@John: That's good to know. I do like little jokes throughout the longer comics but I never thought they would be distracting.

The dragon's identity came up, but I was hoping a combination of the color green, the bubble moustache/goatee combo, and the "Wee Lads" sign would affirm that the dragon is a boy dragon.

I'll be working on my paneling in the future, though I disagree with your point about having two bubbles. I wanted to panels before the dragon entrance to build up some tension before seeing him. I didn't want to give away the dragon too soon.


Thank you for the nice critique though, I don't get many so they are always helpful!

@Mags: Aww, I feel the same way about TOGM, which I have an idea for fan art I just have to finish it up!

@MasterofWeirdness: If you are also referring to kidbatman, yes this is why. That and I've been busy this past week and I took a break from the internet so I wouldn't burn out.
Kimmy
Kimmy
7th Jun 2011, 3:13 PM
THIS IS AWESOME!!!
I feel sorry for the dragon, though... ^_^
Kanela
Kanela
8th Jul 2012, 1:30 AM
lolololooool XD
I LOVED this one hahaha!!
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