Grim Package

14th Jun 2011, 4:53 AM
Grim Package
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Metsfan
Metsfan
14th Jun 2011, 4:53 AM
I miss doing Grim comics, I have a whole bunch of ideas though so I try to spread them around.

Any way, you will notice that my circle head people are missing from this comic. Truth be told their circleness was one part lazy and other part I didn't know how to draw a head.

Well it's time I started to learn, so I've changed my style up and from now on you are going to see those heads coming around. I've also taken the oppurtunity to clean up my line work.

Thank you all! And thank you all PWOT people who are awesome and deserve a thousand super models each. (Comicfury people too)
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ScottanimoBay
ScottanimoBay
14th Jun 2011, 11:02 AM
i like the grim comics especially that showcase that hes just a working class guy, just livin his way.
Aethix
Aethix
14th Jun 2011, 12:16 PM
:O his apartment no. is 666. I didn't catch that the first time.
Guest
14th Jun 2011, 2:15 PM
It's good, but you need to really proof-read more. Very frequently there will be small little grammatical or spelling mistakes, such as on the DVD theres an unnecessary apostrophe in the word "Ghoul's". It's just that small mistakes like that look lazy and could be fixed by a simple proof-read before submitting. Aside from that, the joke is great.
Max
Max
15th Jun 2011, 3:01 AM
LOL I had a hunch about that book being something like that
Metsfan
Metsfan
17th Jun 2011, 2:58 AM
@Scot: He really is. Just trying to get by and do his job for all eternity.

@Aethix: There are only 40 apartments in the building, but the owner did it as a joke!

@Guest: You are right, I'll change it immediataly. My grammar is my biggest issue in my comics and it is stupid for me to not review them. I'm glad you liked the joke though.

I wish I knew who you were though. Guest critiques are so secretive o_o

@Max: It's a DVD. What's a book?
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